ARC Review | Flawless Girls

3.5 stars

This book was definitely heavy-handed at times, but I still enjoyed it. It feels like less of a mystery and more of a social commentary described in very metaphorical terms. While I didn’t mind this for the most part, at times it got to be a bit too much. Also, the author’s note at the end irked me slightly. If you’re going to write something with such a blatantly obvious theme, you should trust your readers to know this and pick up on it. They don’t need it explained to them.

McLemore does have amazing prose, and I did like the overarching theme of there being more than one way to be a girl. But I would just like to point out that this goes for every facet of being a girl – if some girls like wearing dresses and makeup and being in high society, it’s okay. If some girls like wearing pants and tailored shirts, it’s okay. Just because you identify with one way of being a girl, doesn’t mean it’s okay for you rag on other girls that identify differently than you. This still seems to be an issue today, and it goes both ways.

I can see why this not may as well liked as some of their other books, but I think it’s worth checking out. Just know going into it that it’s probably not going to be what you expect.

ARC Review | Life After

3 stars

This wasn’t terrible, but I felt like it was lacking substance in a lot of places. The story deals with the aftermath of a global disaster brought on by climate change, though we aren’t given many details as to how exactly this all occurred. The reader is left to fill in the blanks, presumably with what they hear on the news now about climate change and how it can affect us.

The story is told in multiple POV’s and timelines, with a few chapters happening during the crisis, and the rest happening after the crisis. There are several plot lines that are followed, with each dealing with a set of characters navigating the world they live in. While it was interesting reading about each group’s struggles, I felt like the dialogue and flow needed to be cleaned up. There were times when the dialogue felt more along the lines of fan fiction, and the story didn’t always flow well, with events being disjointed and things entirely skipped over. At one point some of the characters are discussing how to move past a hostile group that have taken over a road, and instead of dealing with this in the story, it’s completely skipped over. If you’re going to mention a problem or issue the characters are dealing with, then you should also mention the solution. Completely ignoring the issue makes it feel like the author didn’t know how to resolve it, so they simply avoided writing about it at all.

I also had a lot of questions that were never answered, such as why Diego and Mia volunteered for the experiment they did, how it happened, etc. Also how was Jeremy never affected by the illnesses his family was? And how did Diego and Mia drive an electric car from Florida to Colorado with no issues? They took the car because they said gas stations were dried up and not working, but I’d think the same would be true for vehicle charging stations. Electricity doesn’t just magically appear out of nowhere. It’s generated at power plants, which use things like water, wind, and of course natural gas and coal. But without people making sure the plants are operating and keeping up with repairs, they would quit working and therefore quit producing electricity. And since charging stations are on whatever grid their power runs on and most of the world seems to be without electricity, this doesn’t seem plausible. Not to mention of course that if those charging stations were on a coal power grid, you’d be using an unclean power source to power your clean vehicle and contributing to the problem anyway. But I digress.

The story itself is good; it could just use some polishing when it comes to dialogue and events.

Local Bookstore Highlight – Marissa’s Books

Store front. You can see the old garage doors from its former use as a tire shop.

There are so many good local bookstores in the Salt Lake Valley, that I decided I wanted to show them a little love. First up is Marissa’s Books.

This shop started in a small location in Murray, and quickly grew to needing more space. They moved to a bigger location, but it was soon evident they’d need even more space. In 2020, they loved to their current location, an old tire shop in Millcreek. This location not only offers a lot of space, but it also has a very unique layout which adds to its charm.

One of the many walkways in the store, this one featuring the history section.

While their main focus is on used books, they also offer new books as well as a variety of gifts. I enjoy wandering around to see what interesting books I can find, as there is always new inventory. Many people (myself included) will drop off used books and then pick up more.

More nonfiction categories. The stairs at the back lead down to the vintage book area.

I think it’s important to shop locally when possible, as you’re supporting your local economy and helping keep local places in business. It was hard seeing so many places close because of the pandemic, so I do what I can for the remaining businesses in my area.

The vintage book area features several chairs to sit and read, along with other vintage items.
The narrow walkway featuring sci-fi and fantasy books. At the end is an opening into YA.
Part of the children’s section
More benches to sit and read, along with classic novels.

I encourage everyone to shop locally, and if you’re ever in the Salt Lake area, stop by Marissa’s and show them some love!

Marissa’s Books and Gifts
3302 S 900 E
Millcreek, UT, 84106
https://marissasbooks.com


ARC Review | The Brightwood Code

4.5 stars

I started this book after work one day, intending to read just a couple of chapters before doing other things. I ended up reading about 85% before I’d even realized it, and decided to push through the last bit before the end of the day. It’s been a long time since I’ve read a full length book in a few hours, but this book was so gripping I couldn’t stop.

This book follows Edda, a former Hello Girl during World War I. I didn’t know much about the Hello Girls, as I’m not well-versed in much of WWI. They were bilingual English/French switchboard operators who helped connect the different American and French troops, and were essential to the war effort. Edda was discharged from her duty early and returned to the US, intending to forget her mistake which she believes cost the lives of the entire Forty-Eighth Baltimore Regiment. As we follow Edda, we learn more about how she became a Hello Girl, and what led up to the tragedy that caused her to return home. This book brilliantly crafts another aspect of the war that many people didn’t give much thought to and didn’t have words for – PTSD. Edda’s struggles with her PTSD are woven throughout the tale and offer great insight into her character.

I do have to say that I wasn’t expecting the ending at all. Everything is not as it seems, as Edda isn’t always the most reliable narrator due to her trauma. However, once you get to the end, you understand completely why Edda is suffering the way she is. There is a second part to the ending, which weaves in another thread of the story that packs an emotional punch. This story moves at a fast pace, with very few unnecessary words or scenes. It’s easy to get pulled in by the narration and even easier to keep flipping the pages to find out what really happened. Highly recommended for anyone who enjoys historical fiction with a bit of mystery involved. Just be prepared for an emotional rollercoaster.

ARC Review | Miss Morgan’s Book Brigade

4 stars

I am not nearly as familiar with WWI as I am WWII, so a lot of things mentioned in this book were new to me. The book follows Jessie Carson as she travels from New York to France to become a member of the American Committee for Devastated France (Comité Américain pour les Régions Dévastées de France), or CARD. I had never heard of CARD before, so I enjoyed reading about the committee and its members. Many of the characters in the book were real people, including Jessie Carson and the Annes, though others were created by the author.

The novel follows dual timelines, with the first being about Jessie during the war, and the second following Wendy, an NYPL librarian in 1987. Jessie is a librarian with the NYPL who joins CARD in order to help the people of France during the war. She believed that books were just as important to people as other necessities, and worked to create a library that villagers could enjoy. She ended up creating a bookmobile, as well as story hour for young children. We witness her struggles with trying to get these things created, along with the struggles of living so close to a war zone and being a Card (as they were called)

Wendy works at the NYPL, scanning and photographing old articles and photos for preservation. She comes across a box which contains information on the Cards and becomes fascinated with their many stories. She learns of Jessie and feels a kinship with her, as they both worked for the NYPL. She begins to research CARD and its members in hopes of tracking down Jessie and finding out what became of her.

The dual timeline worked well for this. Each woman had a distinct voice and their own story and struggles. My biggest issue was the ending. It felt rather abrupt, as it never actually goes over what happened to Jessie. We get some information on her after she left CARD and moved to Paris, but not a fully satisfying conclusion, which is an odd thing seeing as how Wendy was so obsessed with finding her and learning her story. In the author’s note at the end, we do get more information on her, but even then, we are left without the whole story. I ended up researching her myself after I finished the book to find out happened to her after France. The author’s note does include information on several other people in the book and includes some pictures, which I enjoyed. Even though I wasn’t satisfied with the ending, I still enjoyed this and recommend it to anyone who enjoys historical fiction and war novels, and definitely recommend learning more about the Cards and their role in WWI.

ARC Review | Catchpenny

3.5 stars

There is so much going on in this book that it’s sometimes hard to keep track of it all. Besides the many goings on, there are also a lot of terms associated with the magic – or mojo as it’s called – used that aren’t explained very well, which can leave readers in the dark as to what it all means. The basic premise follows the main character, Sid Catchpenny, as he gets called on by an old friend to help track down a missing teenager. It quickly becomes clear that there is much more going on than a simple missing persons case, but it all gets rather convoluted at times. Sid jumps from event to event rather quickly and literally, as he is one of the few people in the world who is a sly – a person who can travel almost instantaneously from one place to another by jumping through mirrors. He’s also one of those main characters that you’re supposed to be sympathetic towards, but it’s rather hard most of the time as he makes himself very unlikeable, much like every other character in this book. There isn’t a single character I really enjoyed. They are mostly tolerable, with a few that I couldn’t stand. When you don’t enjoy the characters, it can make it a lot harder to get through a story, as you can’t connect as well to what’s going on. I do have to say though that most of the characters played their parts well and served their purpose in the story, even if I couldn’t connect to them. Eventually I did come around to Sid as more of his story is explained, but even then, I didn’t love him.

As the events continue, they get rather ridiculous, which is saying a lot for a book that involves jumping through mirrors and collecting mojo off beloved items. However, I did like the underlying message from the final event of the book, even if I didn’t necessarily like everything leading up to it. The ending was ambiguous enough to believe that a sequel could be possible, though not necessary. I think I would have enjoyed this more had there been characters I could connect with more and parts of the magic system explained better. It is one of the most unique magic systems I’ve read about and one I did enjoy, but I wish we’d been given just a little more information on it. If there ends up being a sequel, I’ll pick it up, as I do want to know if a few of the loose ends get taken care of.

ARC Review | Off the Air

3 stars

This book is a perfect example of why I hate the news and media: reporters who will do anything to get a story and don’t seem to care about the people involved in them, news stations that are all about the likes on social media, and all of them not being unbiased like they should be. It’s a world where honest, unbiased reporting seems to be a thing of the past, and those involved will do anything to get the scoop.

With that said, this was pretty well-written. The author definitely knows her stuff about the journalism world, as she spent many years being a journalist herself. There’s plenty of talk of what goes on behind the scenes to make newscasts, and how the world has shifted from the printed stories of old to the new era of Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, etc. The mystery itself is pretty basic – a controversial radio talk show host, Larry Lemmon, has gotten himself murdered, and all the news stations are competing to be the first to get exclusive stories with the people close to him. You can easily see how this story could happen in real life, as Larry was a conservative voice who enjoyed riling up the other side. The political angle isn’t terrible, but we really need to get over the thinking of everyone on one side being the bad guys and everyone on the other side being the good guys. It’s tearing us apart having such black and white thinking, especially since things are rarely that simple.

As far as the murder goes, do I think what Larry did was terrible? Yes. Do I think it warranted murder? No. I was expecting a much bigger reason for why the murderer did what they did, and was a little let down when I learned the actual reason, seeing as how it all felt so hyped up with Larry being such a controversial person. It just didn’t live up to the expectations I had made for myself.

I think this will appeal to anyone with an interest or background in the journalism and news world, and those who like pretty straightforward mysteries. Just don’t set your expectations too high.

ARC Review | I Am Rome

3 stars

I’m not well-versed enough in Roman history and the history of Caesar to be able to comment on the historical inaccuracies, so I will leave that to other reviewers. From what I could notice though, there were definitely liberties taken and changes made, which in some cases is understandable, but in others is rather odd. Some of the side characters we may not have a lot of accurate information on, but Caesar is a very well-known historical figure with quite a bit of information about his life. The original Spanish cover of this book featured the tagline “the true history of Julius Caesar”, which is something I’m glad was removed from the English translation, as it’s basically stating this book is completely accurate, which it is not.

This book is part John Grisham legal thriller and part military strategy and battle. It jumps between timelines, with the present being the trial of Sulla, and the past moving from Caesar as a child, to his teenage years, and then into adulthood. It also features side parts dealing with other people in Caesar’s life, such as his uncle Gaius Marius, his future wife Cornelia, and people who were sided with Sulla, such as Dolabella. Now I understand that the author wanted to set up the conflicts between Caesar, Sulla, and Dolabella, but it was taken way too far. Dolabella and Sulla are both characterized as villains with absolutely no redeeming qualities. They are brutal, sadistic, power hungry men who only care about riches and alcohol and women. Towards the end there is a scene involving Sulla, Dolabella, and a bunch of slaves that just seemed rather ridiculous. Caesar, on the other hand, is written as the hero who can do no wrong. It is basically the Mary Sue and the Villain archetypes, which is frustrating as these were real people with much more depth to them who deserve to be written better.

There are some instances where you can see the story trying to shine through. You can feel the frustrations of the people of Rome and those that were conquered, the tenseness and fear of battle, and the hopes of those trying to do what is right. However, they mostly get overshadowed by the rest of the story, as Caesar’s heroics and Sulla and Dolabella’s villainy have to be center stage. Had each of these people been written with a more realistic edge instead of by archetypes, it could have shifted the story greatly.

This isn’t a terrible book, but I think those who are knowledgable about Roman history, particularly involving the times of Caesar, will find themselves frustrated at the liberties taken with the story and characters.

ARC Review | Sisters of Fortune

3.5 stars

Most people are familiar with the Titanic and its story – the unsinkable ship which sunk on its maiden voyage in the early morning hours of April 15, 1912. Many people are familiar with the story from the James Cameron film, and even if they haven’t seen it, they still know the basic facts. This book tells the story of the Fortune family, who were real passengers on the ship when it sank. While I enjoyed the story overall, I felt that it was missing something in order to make it a more compelling read.

The story mainly follows the 3 Fortune sisters, Flora, Mabel, and Alice, as well as one of the sisters’ love interests, Chess. While the sisters were real people, Chess was a completely original character to the story, though he does take much inspiration from a real passenger aboard the ship. Most of the novel is spent following the sisters along their travels, from the end of their Grand Tour of Europe to the beginnings of their stay on the ship, to the eventual sinking. I understand setting the scene, but it began to drag a bit for me. The ship doesn’t hit the iceberg until the 60% mark, which is a decent way into the book. And while the sinking took a relatively short time in real life (approx. 2 1/2 hours), it almost feels too rushed in the book, with it being done by about the 80% mark. I felt disconnected from the events taking place during the sinking. This could partly be because the Fortune family and everyone they interacted with were first class passengers, so we only get their perspective. What the passengers in first class and the passengers in third class experienced during the sinking are wildly different, though I understand it would have been hard to include third class passenger perspectives without rewriting much of the book. This is not to say that there weren’t tragic parts, but more that there wasn’t enough time spend exploring more of what was occurring.

I also felt a little let down when reading the afterword and discovering the author made changes to the Fortune sisters’ lives. While there isn’t a ton of information on them, there were things that were known but were changed anyway. I think I would have preferred the author stick more to the truth about them, though I understand this would have changed a major dynamic of the novel.

I did enjoy many parts though – the descriptions of the ship itself and all the extravagances it featured were really interesting to read, along with the characters seeing and reacting to these things. I also enjoyed knowing that the author included all real people (besides Chess), as I like to stop and read more about the people themselves as I’m going along. It helps me get more into the story. There were also a few things I didn’t know about the voyage which I learned while reading, which shows that the author did do research before writing.

This was enjoyable overall, and I think it will appeal to anyone who enjoyed the film and like romantic novels, though those looking for a little more action or substance on this particular subject may not find it as enjoyable.

ARC Review | The Tainted Cup

4 stars

While this book started off a little confusing, it quickly started to draw me in. It’s fantasy, but not really in the way you’d expect. There’s a sort of magic system, but not in the typical sense. It’s one that’s rather hard to explain, but which I enjoyed. It involves people who have been given grafts to augment certain abilities – strength, memory, looks. These people can hold certain jobs and perform certain tasks, and all of this is integrated into the story and world very well. It might take a minute to understand at the beginning, but once you do it is quite enjoyable. This book also gave me major Sherlock Holmes vibes regarding the two main characters and the mystery in the plot. It’s not a bad thing – I love Sherlock Holmes, and it almost felt like a new take on the character, while still being completely original. There were also faint hints of Attack on Titan, though it isn’t a huge resemblance, and not nearly as depressing and such.

The book starts off right at the beginning of a murder investigation and throws you into the world of augments and their abilities. However, instead of being a simple murder investigation, it quickly becomes a much larger plot with many supporting characters and lots of threads to follow. As you move along, the leviathans are introduced – huge creatures that the world is desperately trying to stave off. Not much information is given on them – we don’t why they do what they do or why they have changed over the years, just that they have. I’m guessing this could possibly be revealed in future books, along with more information on the Empire itself, and on our main characters. While there is a lot of info given on Din, Ana remains mostly a mystery. I am quite interested to see how this series continues and am looking forward to the next book.