
3 stars
This was quite an interesting book. It’s basically a cross between National Treasure and the Robert Langdon series by Dan Brown, but for teenagers. I do have to admit that Dan Brown books are my guilty pleasure. They’re interesting and easy to read, but still keep your attention throughout the book and make you ask questions. I also like the puzzles Dan Brown uses in his books. They can be fun to try and solve and the story doesn’t generally get too overwhelming with them. This wasn’t quite on that level; while it did have an interesting storyline, it couldn’t quite stand up to what it gets compared to.
I wasn’t sure if I was going to like Arizona, but she grew on me. A teen on the spectrum, she loves puzzles and cyphers. It was hard to believe at times some of the things she does; it felt way out of the depth of most teenagers. While she isn’t supposed to be your “typical” teenager, it still feels too much at times. And while puzzles and cyphers don’t usually bother me, here they were more of a struggle to get to. Part of the problem is that half of them were missing – the text would skip right over where they should be and continue on. I know this is an advanced copy, but it really took me out of the story as I wanted to actually see and read the puzzles. The other part is they get over-explained and then solved way too fast. There isn’t much anticipation and mystery. I did learn some new things though, such as what the language of the birds is and the difference between NAD 27 and NAD 83. I liked Lily as well. She’s really the only other character the reader spends much time with. Arizona’s mom and the villains aren’t fleshed out and don’t have a lot of page time, so it’s harder to connect with them.
The ending was a little too neat for me as well. So a random character we’re introduced to briefly in the middle of the book shows up again at the end to help Arizona after her crazy story and asks no questions? Then just disappears again? And Sam Yeats and her part seemed out of place. I just can’t see things going the way they did.
I do think it was interesting though, and the author obviously spend a lot of time crafting the puzzles. With just a bit of polishing this could work quite well. I do think it will appeal more to its intended audience in its current form. It just didn’t quite live up to my expectations.








