2 stars
This series has been so up and down. The first few books were great, then they slid downhill, then they came back up, and now we’re back in a hole.
I feel like there was no editing to this, or only enough to cover the basics. There was tons of repetition and poorly worded sentences. There were random things thrown in that were never followed up on, and it was so heavy handed. Like I get that the point of the story was to show us that Nadya was fine without an arm. The only problem is there was no showing. We were told, constantly, on almost every single page for the first part of the book, how perfect Nadya was without her arm and how it was so unfair that her adoptive parents got her a prosthetic, but we are never really shown all this. I don’t need to be told on every page that Nadya is capable without her arm; I got it after the first couple of times. But I would like to be shown. As for the prosthetic, I know she didn’t want one and was very adamant about this and was so upset that she wasn’t asked if she wanted one. But then in her world she is gifted an arm and she’s just like, “oh yea this is pretty sweet,” and carries on with her new arm. After so many pages of being told she didn’t want one or need one and no one asked her opinion. But then she was never asked if she wanted one in her world. It’s acceptable though, because it was gifted? Sure. She also has a lot of nationalism for a 9 year old child. When she’s not talking about her perfect she is without her arm, she’s talking about Mother Russia and how she can’t believe Mother Russia gave her up and how she would do anything to return to Mother Russia. It’s way more nationalism than I’ve ever seen any 9 year old have (Russia is also an odd choice, considering). She also points out how upset she is about her furniture. Her adoptive parents picked out furniture for her before they brought her home, and she’s upset because she can’t see it as her furniture because she didn’t choose it. What child gets so upset about furniture? What child talks like this? I also can’t help but point out that if the author was so keen on reminding us that people need to respect others cultures and such, then she should have actually written about them correctly. I’m not an expert on Russia, but I do know enough about naming structures, namely last names. Nadya says several times that her Russian name is Nadya Sokolov, but last names in Russian that end with -ov decline to -ova for females. Her last name should have been Sokolova (if I’m missing some obscure or not well known fact about name structures, feel free to correct me; however, I’m pretty sure this is how it goes). The grammar for the Russian “Be sure” has been pointed out by others as not being correct either. I’m not knowledgable enough on the language to know if this is correct, so I defer to others who have said it’s not. But the point is, don’t shame people on not knowing or understanding a culture if you can’t write it correctly.
There are other parts that seem like lazy writing, or lazy editing, or both. There is a second child mentioned by Nadya’s adoptive parents. They claim to have adopted a son from China, but that is literally the only thing you hear of him. He’s never mentioned again. Did he die? Did they give him up? Did he grow up? We don’t know. But it makes no sense to mention a second child and then never mention him again, especially when the first part of the book focuses on the family. Later, in Belyyreka, we are introduced to Galina’s husband. What’s his name? I don’t know. He doesn’t get the honor of a name. He’s just Galina’s husband. Alexi more or less tries to kill Nadya, and then wants to marry her in the next chapter. There is no big objective to accomplish, no bad guy to vanquish, no trial to overcome. She just grows and marries Alexi with nothing in between. And then, she goes home. Nadya doesn’t do anything to get sent back. She just end up back in the real world one day, at about the same point she left, having de-aged from Belyyreka back to the age she was in the real world. It’s more like a fever dream than a lived experience.
I’m back to the point where I don’t know if I’ll continue with the series. I’ve hit this point before, and nearly did give up. But the last two books were good enough to reel me back in. It may depend on who the next book is about. We’ll see.