
3.5
A huge improvement over the first novel. I feel like the story and writing flowed better, and the author’s were able to meld their writing together more. There are improvements that can still be made, but I feel as if they’re moving in the right direction.
I was not a fan of Jackson in the first novel, but his character is much improved in this one. His comments are much less sexist, and the few he does make in a joking manner work better with the conversation. There wasn’t a single “tight, little body” comment, of which I am eternally grateful. His relationship with Mackenzie has a big improvement as well. While they still bicker, it fits better with the story and you can see more of the respect and trust they’re gaining for each other.
The story does feel as if it moves a little too fast for how short it is. The book is a little over 250 pages but barely lets up. Slightly longer with a little more to the plot would have helped. We don’t get much character development from anyone besides Mac and Jackson; and while I’m happy Jackson’s character gained a lot of development, Mac’s was less so, and every other character was almost non-existent, Hopefully we can get a little more development from other characters, especially those that seem to be mainstays in the series.
I believe the authors are getting a better groove and feel as if they will continue to improve, as they’ve shown a lot of improvement since the last novel. A bit more polishing and I think this will be a great series.








